(Sanitized) COMMENTS ON OISD STUDY, INTERNATIONAL CONNECTIONS OF VENEZUELAN COMMUNISTS

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CIA-RDP78-02771R000500120004-7
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November 11, 2016
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July 30, 1998
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Approved For Release 1999/08/24: C qpW&T8-02771 25X1A8a 25X1A8a Comments onitudy IMIenational Connections o Venezuelan Co General: There is inconsistency in the text regarding the capitalization of Spanish names. For example, up to page 4 they are lower-ease, and from there on the patronymic is sometimes capitalized, sometimes not. Summary: p. 1, line 5: Although the word 'data' is sometimes used with a singular verb, we believe the plural would be better here. p. 1, line 13: Suggest either "whatever the name under which..." or "under whatever name they may masquerade". p. 2, line l: Probably intended to be "It is t especially..." p. 2, line 4: Again, preference would be for plural verb with 'data'. Text: p. 1, line 14: Humbert-Droz, not Humberto Droz. p. 2, line 7: 25X1A9a p. 2, line 21: Omit comma after "complexions" "Democratico" for "Demucratico".'' p. 3, line 8 from bottom: underline 'ndamentos".~-r p. 4, line 33: Source #12, if we remember correctly, was not very reliable. p. 7, line 21: For Sivolou read Sivolov. V' p. 7, line 29: For Juan Pablo SANCHEZ Aguilar, read Juan Pablo SAINZ Aguilar. (Source is known to have been mistaken.) p. 7, line 33: Nicanor ALVAREZ Rodriguez was name on pass- port used by Nilo Risquet de Jesus VALDEZ y Saldanas, generally known as Nilo VALDEZ. It is suggested that the name VALDEZ be used. Approved For Release 1999/08/24 CIA,? RDP78-02771 R000500120004-7 r p'pproved For Release 1999/08/24: CIA 771 R000500120004-7 p. 7, line 331 The "unidentified" GP Cuba member has since been identified as Carlos Rafael RODRIGUEZ y Rodriguez. p. 8, line 8 from bottom: "spent" in place of "spend". p. 15, line 31 "Willi Muenzenburg" for "Willy Munzenburo". p. 17, line 4 from bottoms 25X1A2g p. 20, line 28t For(PSD) read (PCC). The CP Colombia p. 21, line 2t used the name Social Democratic Party (PSD) only between 1944 and 1947; after 1947, the party, under Gilberto VIEIRA White, again adopted the name Partido Comunista de Colombia. For PSD read PCC. p. 21, line 41 For PSD read PCC. p. 21, line 14: For Pompeya read Pompeyo. V' -2- Approved For Release 1999/081l4IA;-RDP78-02771 R000500120004-7 Approved For Release 1999/08/24: CIA-RDP78-02771 R000500120004-7 25X1A8a Approved For Release 1999/08/24: CIA-RDP78-02771 R000500120004-7